To show how I can shape my text for an audience.
In this poem I have tried to slow the pace of my writing by carefully selecting line brakes and choosing words and images that show how bored I was.
Just A Boring Poem:
UHHHHHHHHHHHHH
UHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
UHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Sitting on the warm chair
Are we there yet!
Harry we just set off
I'm Boredddd
Just play on your tablet
Its out of charge
Then watch a movie!
But the volume on it pierces my ears
Then just wait
I stare at the surroundings
I see one cow
With brown spots
Staring at me
In a disturbing manner
Are we there yet
No!!!!!
My brothers armpits STINK!
Did he have to play rugby before we left!
UHHHHHHHHHRRRRRRGGGGG
Mum I have got a headache
Just drink some water
I need a wee
Fine we will pull over
I then made the mistake of peeing on an electric fence
OWWWW
Back to the car Harry
MUUUUUM
I'M BORED!!!!
How long
How long
Just another 5 hours!
UUUUHHHHHGGGGGG!
I really like your poem harry I could feel your bordness!!!!!!
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